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Courtesy Flush

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When ye be on the throne
of porcelain, ye must remember
there are rules.

Some rules...
can be broken,
these can't.

Whether ye be
in the company of
friend or foe...

When sittin'
doin' all yer tootin'
and you smell anything
but roses...

Ye gotta remember yer
courtesy flush.
I realized that I may be getting a little to serious with my poems lately. I wanted to change for at least one poem. Instead of being serious and intense I decided to take a bit of a humorous approach. The idea for this poem came to me...Where? You will be able to guess where after you finish reading.

After about 3 days of staring at the poem and constantly rewriting the poem I finished with this.

I'm not sure I am fond of the quality. But I thought it was a hilarious concept.
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Daroneasa's avatar
Heh, this should be posted in the bathroom at my house. I live with two guys, so.....a courtesy flush would be a welcome skill to teach them!

While I'm no good at poetry myself, I will say I think the lines are a little too long in the upper sets, as compared to the uniformness they gain later on.

Delightfully funny, keep writing! :D